Thank you for applying to My Little Jamjar! However, we'd like to see the following revisions in your application:
♥ Regarding his personality, We'd like to see a little more regarding who she is and how he acts. Does Hayate have any other likes, dislikes, or other quirks aside from simply being a Celestial?
♥ Regarding her strengths and weaknesses, what else is known about her? Is she good - or conversely, susceptible to - any weapons, magic, foods, vices or virtues, etc.?
Please turn in your revisions by Tuesday, November 19th for reconsideration, and again, we thank you for applying!
REVISIONS
♥ Regarding his personality, We'd like to see a little more regarding who she is and how he acts. Does Hayate have any other likes, dislikes, or other quirks aside from simply being a Celestial?
♥ Regarding her strengths and weaknesses, what else is known about her? Is she good - or conversely, susceptible to - any weapons, magic, foods, vices or virtues, etc.?
Please turn in your revisions by Tuesday, November 19th for reconsideration, and again, we thank you for applying!